This is where I want to go by Sue
Dear Mr. Fabbo,
For the class field trip, I would like to go to Six Flags. It would be educational if the class reads the brochures about the amusement park. We could earn money by holding a bake sale and a car wash.
Six Flags would be fun with all the roller coasters. There is also something called, "Fly me to the Moon." It is a 3-D movie, and the seats move! Other places won't be that much fun. For example, zoos aren't a good place beacuse some people (especially girls) might think zoos smell bad. Six Flags does not smell bad.
Once, I went to Six Flags, and I rode a roller coaster called Kingda Ka. I had to wait almost two hours to ride it, so if we go there, we should go early. I rode other rides too. I even rode bumper cars with my dad! Six Flags is a big place, so I think that two teachers and two parent chaperones should go along just in case.
I hope you will think about my idea, Mr. Fabbo. If you say yes, you should be one of the teachers accompanying the students.
Sincerely,
Sue