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Persuasive Writing(A truly well rounded education)_written by Jaehyen (9th)

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Persuasive Writing(Americans) - Written by Andrew (10th)

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Forest and Trees - Written by Joe(6th)

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How can we protect the environment? - Written by Jehee

  The earth has a lot of problems since the industrial revolution. Grobal warming is today's biggest problem. And this is not the only

problem: a lot of animals on earth have been exterminated. That's why I am here to help.

  I am the director of a wildlife conservation company what we're doing is protecting the environment and the animals living in it. As

I said, a lot of animals are dying. We have to do somrthing to save them. This problem is not one you can neglect. It will soon become

a big problem, which will be hard to solve.

  My plan for this problem is, first we have to protect our national parks. Second, we are should not let companies build unnecessary

factories and make them take down unnecessary ones already in existence. Last, we have to keep our eyes on animals and plants that

are about to become extinct, it's hard and almost impossible to bring them back, so in order to not lose them, we have to protect them.

  Some hunters secretly enter national parks,which do not allow poeple to enter, to hunt animals. Even thought it's prohibited,they still

did it somehow. We have to secure our parks more than before.

  Oneday when I was driving around, I saw some factories which were not working and just abandoned. There must be a lot of factories

that which were not working and just abandoned.  It's a waste of money and nature.

Animals and plants are also part of our environment and they help us live. If they didn't exist, we couldn't live like this. In order to live, we

must keep animals and plants safe, especially those that are about to become extinct. We have to grow more plants and breed more

animals to  support those species.

  This is a brief summary of my plan for how we can protect the environment. Human conveniences are also very important but protecting

the environment is much more important than human convenience. 

Posted: May 21 2008 by Tenafly | with no comments
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Dreams, What do they mean?-written by yezy (7th)

Posted: May 19 2008 by Ridgewood | with no comments
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The most important thing, I have ever learned - Hongmi (3rd)

Posted: May 19 2008 by Ridgewood | with 1 comment(s)
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Here Today, Gone Tomorrow - written by Heather (4th)

Posted: May 16 2008 by Ridgewood | with 1 comment(s)
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You won $100,000.00! - written by JinWoo

  One day, I won the lottery, so I got a $100,000.00! I felt like I was flying in the sky. Last year, I went to Africa, so I met African young people and old people. Almost all of them are sick and in pain. They need food and water. Also they need medicine, so I want to donate money to them and I'll go there again and play with tham, help them and make food for them.

  Also, I want to buy presents for my parents, my mother always works for me. She is always working hard, so I want to buy her and my father a ticket to travel anywhere they want, I want my country to be stronger in the world. For example, if I donate to my nation, I would make more ice skating rinks for figure skater. But there are no rinks for her to practice in. So these days that is a big problem for her. If I build new rinks for figure sksting, I think she can practice a lot, at anytime, with ease.

  If I really had $100,000.00. I will use it to help people with big problems and for my future.  

Posted: May 13 2008 by Tenafly | with no comments
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Anger & Self-control wrtten by Zoo
  •   Sometimes, we get very angry so that we cannot control. One time I was mostly angry  when my brother did mean things to me such as saying mean words to me. My brother's friend came over to have a playdate. I  set the PS2 up. THey started to play. They played baseball on the PS2 game system. I just asked to join the game, and my brother said mean words to me. He said I couldn't play. I started to get angry at that time. Then, I passed in front of the T.V. My brother hit me with his baseball bat just because I  blocked his view for almost two seconds. I got really angry. At that time my mother came and scolded my brother. I was back in my room, trying to help myself calm down. This was my technique I used to get myself under control. I went downstairs and heard my mother say that my brother would not play if he does mean things to me. At that time, I felt sorry for him(I don't know why). But at least, I was back in control. We shook our hands and said, "Sorry." Then we played games together which made me extra happy! Therefore, I am going to try to get myself back in control if I ever get angry again.  
Posted: May 13 2008 by Tenafly | with no comments
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Expository writing (Not enough)-written by jaehyun (9th)

Posted: May 12 2008 by Ridgewood | with no comments
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Persuasive writing: Less is More -written by Mark (10th)

Posted: May 05 2008 by Ridgewood | with no comments
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Pursuasive writing: Gandhi's seven sins-written by Andrew (10th)

Posted: May 05 2008 by Ridgewood | with no comments
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Prayer for Tomorrow - Written by Serena(6th)

Posted: May 03 2008 by Fort Lee | with no comments
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Trees and Forests - Written by Serena Su(6th)

Posted: May 02 2008 by Fort Lee | with no comments
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Attention Staff of J.K.Phones - Written by Bobby Kim

Posted: May 01 2008 by Fort Lee | with no comments
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